Novelizations
are a tricky thing, especially if you’re working from an earlier
version of the script. There’s minute changes (Regulus vs Regula,
Alpha Ceti V vs Ceti Alpha V for example), expanded scenes (a *lot*
more Peter Preston, Joachim has serious reservations about Khan),
things that existed in the novels only later conceded as Canon (Sulu
was already a Captain transferring to Excelsior at the end of the month (yes, the ship was already named) Saavik’s half-Romulan heritage (which
might as well be canon by this point), and things that only exist
here (Sulu again, nearly killed on the bridge when Reliant attacks in
the nebula, resuscitated by David Marcus and out of the action for
the remainder of the scene, and Spock not knowing Jim’s Birthday
until *now*, Peter’s crush on Saavik and her tutoring him).
Then
there’s also tweaks, I don’t know how much of it is author’s liberty
and how much is script vs screen, but after 37 years of knowing this
movie the words don’t flow nearly as well here. The words are
sometimes substituted or flipped around. It detracts a bit from the
overall product. Kirk is also a lot closer to despair and closer to
the breaking point than the movie shows us, theatrically so. Despite
all this though, it remains a fun read and there’s a bit little more
to discover.
Gonna admit I did remember Kirk avoiding the urge to scream Dive! Dive! Dive!. that’s the ONLY thing I remembered for sure from the last time (aside from again Peter Preston and Saavik expanded backstory)
Here’s some (a lot of) notes and highlights:

fromthefilesofredshirtgal





