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Star Trek II Novelization

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Novelizations are a tricky thing, especially if you’re working from an earlier version of the script. There’s minute changes (Regulus vs Regula, Alpha Ceti V vs Ceti Alpha V for example), expanded scenes (a *lot* more Peter Preston, Joachim has serious reservations about Khan), things that existed in the novels only later conceded as Canon (Sulu was already a Captain transferring to Excelsior at the end of the month (yes, the ship was already named) Saavik’s half-Romulan heritage which might as well be canon by this point), and things that only exist here (Sulu again, nearly killed on the bridge when Reliant attacks in the nebula, resuscitated by David Marcus and out of the action for the remainder of the scene, and Spock not knowing Jim’s Birthday until *now*, Peter’s crush on Saavik and her tutoring him).

Then there’s also tweaks, I don’t know how much of it is author’s liberty and how much is script vs screen, but after 37 years of knowing this movie the words don’t flow nearly as well here. The words are sometimes substituted or flipped around. It detracts a bit from the overall product. Kirk is also a lot closer to despair and closer to the breaking point than the movie shows us, theatrically so. Despite all this though, it remains a fun read and there’s a bit little more to discover.

Gonna admit I did remember Kirk avoiding the urge to scream Dive! Dive! Dive!. that’s the ONLY thing I remembered for sure from the last time (aside from again Peter Preston and Saavik expanded backstory)

Here’s some (a lot of) notes and highlights:

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“ Do you remember the scene in The Wrath of Khan where Captain Terrell and Chekov are looking around the Reliant and Chekov suddenly notices a child looking at him through a window and calls out for Terrell? A child that...
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Do you remember the scene in The Wrath of Khan where Captain Terrell and Chekov are looking around the Reliant and Chekov suddenly notices a child looking at him through a window and calls out for Terrell? A child that scurries off the second Terrell arrives, leaving Chekov to attempt to describe what he saw? What? You don’t remember this particular scene?

That’s because it was deleted before the film was finalized and released. But in one version of the script, this child did exist and even appears again near the end of film.

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In this alternate ending,  Khan would be nearly ready to detonate the Genesis device when we suddenly see the same toddler crawling onto the transporter pad.  With a natural child’s curiosity, he begins to head in the direction of the projectile.

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Here is a behind the scenes photo of almost the same scene as a above, but from a different angle. Meyer seems to coaxing the child to come toward him and the child is rising slightly as if he were about to stand.

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Again, the bright shiny object with the flashing lights seems to fascinate the toddler and he tries to get closer to it.

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And once he had gotten to this point, where he is close enough to touch it, Khan would have detonated the Genesis Device, not knowing that the child is there. Which would have been a horrifying scene in the midst of what is already a horrifying scene back on the Enterprise. If this child exists, then there must be others who also die along with their parents  on the ship. What a way to emphasize the horrors of war.

But even though these photos exist as proof that Nicholas Meyer once had this ending in mind, there is no trace of the actual film footage. It was most likely destroyed once Meyer decided this would be way too dark. The audience would already have been reeling from watching Spock slowly die from radiation exposure. To then watch a scene with a child walking slowly towards his death would be an extra punch to the gut that might detract from the scene before it. Wisely, all scenes involving the toddler were cut.

There are online articles speculating that this child was Khan’s son. Most likely, this was never true. No one from the movie with any knowledge of this scene have ever given even the slightest indication the toddler’s father was Khan. Most likely it was meant to be representative of other small children who would have likely been sired by the young men and women in Khan’s crew.

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The Child still appears in the Star Trek II novelization by Vonda McIntyre but only in the Botany Bay scenes:

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The child is not brought up again after they take over Reliant (in fact Khan later has to crawl to the transporter room to activate the Genesis Device and crawl back to the bridge because I guess no one had thought of having the control device on the bridge until a latter version of the script.

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Greg Cox’s To Reign in Hell (part 3 of his awesone 3 Part Khan books in the early 2000s) postulates that the children and weaker members of his Entourage were left behind on Genesis guarding the Reliant crew.

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Star Trek II Novelization

Novelizations are a tricky thing, especially if you’re working from an earlier version of the script. There’s minute changes (Regulus vs Regula, Alpha Ceti V vs Ceti Alpha V for example), expanded scenes (a *lot* more Peter Preston, Joachim has serious reservations about Khan), things that existed in the novels only later conceded as Canon (Sulu was already a Captain transferring to Excelsior at the end of the month (yes, the ship was already named) Saavik’s half-Romulan heritage (which might as well be canon by this point), and things that only exist here (Sulu again, nearly killed on the bridge when Reliant attacks in the nebula, resuscitated by David Marcus and out of the action for the remainder of the scene, and Spock not knowing Jim’s Birthday until *now*, Peter’s crush on Saavik and her tutoring him).

Then there’s also tweaks, I don’t know how much of it is author’s liberty and how much is script vs screen, but after 37 years of knowing this movie the words don’t flow nearly as well here. The words are sometimes substituted or flipped around. It detracts a bit from the overall product. Kirk is also a lot closer to despair and closer to the breaking point than the movie shows us, theatrically so. Despite all this though, it remains a fun read and there’s a bit little more to discover.

Gonna admit I did remember Kirk avoiding the urge to scream Dive! Dive! Dive!. that’s the ONLY thing I remembered for sure from the last time (aside from again Peter Preston and Saavik expanded backstory)

Here’s some (a lot of) notes and highlights:

Keep reading

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On board Reliant, Khan Singh shut off communications to Regulus I and stretched back in his chair. Not quite what he had foreseen, but a most satisfying climax, nonetheless.

Thank you, Star Trek II novelization for confirming that Khan does indeed cum when Kirk shouts his name into the ether.

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Star Trek author Vonda N. McIntyre died yesterday after a long battle with metastatic pancreatic cancer. She was 70 years old. 

A winner of both the Nebula and Hugo awards, she’s best known by the masses for a single name she contributed to the Star Trek mythos: Hikaru, Sulu’s given first name in the novel The Entropy Effect. The name became canon when writer Peter David visited the set of Star Trek VI: The Undiscovered Country to prepare for the film’s comics adaptation. He convinced Nicholas Meyer to insert in the script, making a certain set of fans (including myself) very happy.

Thank you for everything, Vonda.

Photo by Michael Ward on Flickr.

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RIP Vonda, you expanded the Star Trek universe & we salute you.

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The Entropy Effect

Classic Alternate Timeline story where Kirk is killed by a future version of a mad professor – who was also Spock’s mentor (ofc) – and Spock trying to rectify it for the good of the universe (no seriously if he doesn’t the universe collapses in a hundred years.

It’s tried and true trek storytelling done to death since death. I liked it, although the two main antagonists - the Mad Scientist and the Overzealous attorney are very cartoonish.

Some notes I had:

- Georges Mordeaux is such a late 70s early 80s name for a villain either in trek or DC comics. 

- Captain Kirk turned down an extended polyamorous relationship *three times* and of course it was true love.

- Sulu’s hair and mustache are long on a dare. 

- Spock once got drunk, though doesn’t admit it

- There are Beard repressors

- “Hypermorphic Botulism”

- This is not an Uhura or Chekov book.

- Hikaru has a crisis of where he should be and if he should start a relationship with the Security Chief. 

- All the redshirts are interesting here and not a variation of “1960s-I-have-cop-show-background”

- It’s partly played off as a bad dream, sort of a la Donnie Darko, and Spock is the only one with the whole story.

- “He’s worked himself right into a fit of the vapors.”

-Kirk sitting by Spock’s bedside when he’s recovering

- Jim once grew a moustache but it was brick red. 

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